When looking up fellow drabble creators I noticed The Writaholic’s Blog and that Aheila has a drabble challenge. So I thought I’d give this one a try. Its called Drabble Day – Guest.
Guest
“So, you’ve broken through my state of the art defenses, incapacitated my private army and disabled my robot attack dogs,” Dr Williams hissed as he circled the man bound to the chair. “You made it to my secret chamber before finally meeting my ninja nuns.”
The man shook his head to combat the pain.
“Have you any last words before I kill you?” Williams growled.
The man looked up and smiled.
“I’m sorry your pizza order took longer than 30 minutes,” he said cheerily. “Your business is important so please accept this free dessert voucher to use within 30 days.”



Would make a great ad! V nice.
Thanks for that. Maybe it would at that.
*laughs* I’m with tskraghu; it would make an awesome ad. “Our delivery man are THAT devoted. Order now”
I do like the idea that the man on the chair might just be kidding and ready to free himself and kick Dr Williams’ butt.
Hmm. 2 votes for an ad. I may need to contact an agency. Both of you will get a cut of course
Very cheeky ! I had a good chuckle while visualising this scenario and especially the possible varied facial expressions of the captive ! I like it !
Thanks. These pizza delivery guys are soooo dedicated now.
thats why dominos doesnt offer that guarantee anymore!
good one =)
I wondered what had happened to that offer. I miss my free triple cheesecake selection.